Gamers instead of looking at and shaming my own builds let’s instead do it to yours we’ll be heading to the slums that is the Discord server and perusing through your guys’s builds posted there and I’ll give my professional advice and a rating alright Gamers we’ve arrived here at the builds to critique section And let’s take a look at the first build here by Shadows so he’s saying he’s feeling oddly proud of this for being a small shack but what can I improve well just taking a quick look at this I can see that the shape is very interesting But it’s lacking in some detail and the roof does look kind of weird so I’m going to quickly recreate this in Minecraft and just kind of illustrate those points by fixing them you know okay so here is his build recreated by me in Minecraft block for block and just Taking a look at this the first thing I can see that looks definitely very odd to me is the roof design having these like joins here where they’re basically connected by like you know not even a pixel here it definitely looks very strange in my opinion uh yeah definitely Like this area up here all right and so here’s my fixed roof design uh again it’s not exactly perfect and my idea was just you know smoothing them out a little bit we don’t have any of those weird joins where it’s you know there’s like that little angle there That’s like just hanging on by a thread we’ve smoothened those out by adding in more blocks now the next thing I would personally do is obviously add some detail into these areas he has done so by adding in some barrels here which is definitely nice but the walls could Definitely use some detailing so the first detail you could add in like this is a simple little Archway you can even Chuck a block in there like a chest or like maybe even a pot plant with an azalea or just straight up in Azalea that will look nice as well now as for The barrel pile let’s maybe fix it up a little bit let’s do something like this and add a chest beside it and then maybe an extinguished campfire on the left with a lantern there that looks pretty nice let’s maybe even try getting some lectins in here I’m gonna have to remove Some of this just to uh you know place these and they’re definitely a very unique and interesting looking detail to add we could even maybe put some signs in front of these just to make them look even more different and probably weird looking and yeah so we’ve gone from Something super simple and basic but with a definitely a very nice Foundation over here and I’ve just kind of put my spin on it and just refined it and Polished a little bit more and just for the base build here I’m probably going to rate this one maybe a 5 out of 10. The shape is like I’ve said before unique and interesting and different however it just needs some detail and some better roof designs alright for the next build we’re just going to take a quick look at this one now as you can see we have another very very unique Style of build the only thing I’d recommend really adding is just some extra detail by adding in these pillars like see these pillars here if we just added them like maybe every three blocks or so but to rate the build as it is I’d probably rate this an 8 out of 10. it’s Very unique I love these roof designs of these towers and the ruin thing is a very interesting idea definitely looks awesome at night time next up we have a house designed by James de bacon now once again it’s definitely a nice Foundation but there are some things That I would change the interior does look pretty cool for this one though but it’s just this exterior area here and I won’t bother recreating this just to show what I’d change because it’s going to take too long recreating this whole freaking house all right and here is the House recreated by me I’ve gotten it as close as I possibly could it’s not going to be perfect also uh yeah it’s mainly just the front of the house here he didn’t really show the sides so I’m not even gonna bother with that just because it’s this main front area here that I Want to touch on with the first thing here being the leaves they look like doo doo so let’s fix them real quick there we go much better now I know the guy was playing on Pocket Edition so I don’t know if you can really get the better leaves add-on but I highly recommend Getting it it makes leaves look so much better now the main thing that I mentioned to this person was this area here of the roof looks kind of weird the front area actually here looks really nice I actually really love the way this looks the only thing I would probably Change is this block here and making it a stair block that just looks way better already I love the armor stand I love this detail over here oh but also another thing I just remembered is these blocks here you don’t have to use fences all the way across you can use some Fence gates in there just kind of breaks up the uh you know repetition of the fences and it also helps with this issue here where your fences connect up to your detailing blocks and effects that just Chuck a fence gate in there it’s not going to connect up there we go so Yeah honestly I wouldn’t change too much with the actual like front area of this I would probably change these trapdoors to Spruce ones even though they’re Spruce they match up with the oak logs a little bit nicer and they’re not as like stand out-ish of a detail compared to The Oak trap doors which really attract your eyes and they look kind of ugly in my opinion now let’s address this front little uh roof area and the actual roof over here as well all right and here is my version of his roof design and also His little porch thing as well so as you can see over here in the old build we have a bit of a flat wall back here we have a window as well which looks kind of weird in my opinion having it touch the very bottom and then the roof of the Porch here is very just kind of flat and Bland and another thing that I really didn’t like as well is using Stone as the main blocks for the roof and then wood as the trim I like to do the opposite I mean to each their own but I Feel like it looks way better having the stone as the trim and then the wood as the actual main roof kind of area and yeah instead of adding in that little window thing over the there we instead just added in some pot plants up here which looks kind of cool in my opinion We also shrunk down his uh massive freaking chimney into just a simple one block one now the next thing here is the roof of the porch instead of just having simply you know dark oak slabs there we’ve added in three or even four different types of blocks here but Heading back over to the original build over here to rate this I’d probably give it a solid six or seven out of ten let’s just go 6.5 we’ll meet in the middle basically the bottom half of this base I really love this looks awesome down here But once you get up to the roof it looks kind of weird alright and next up we have this water wheel build by toxic craft so we’ve got this nice like house style build situated on this nice stone brick foundation and we’ve also got the water wheel attached over here we’ve got Another house on the back here and then we have this little area with some logs and then another log pile area over here as well he also has some other angles over here like the back of the build actually really like this open area here it’s kind of like a blacksmith style Like undercover area I don’t know I just really love that I don’t know how I feel about the beacons for or like lights they look kind of weird to me I also really like this Cross Beam and then this area as well with like a whole Bunch of logs and then here’s like an interior shot yeah this is really well built I actually really love this and for real this time I’m not going to be recreating this in Minecraft because it is going to take so long okay and here’s the build painstakingly recreated by me In Minecraft because the guy created it in bloody Bedrock of course now please forgive me I didn’t recreate like absolutely everything just the main like area that I want to focus on so yeah we’re not going to talk about the fact that the back of this build looks Absolutely whack uh yet just don’t worry about that so yeah once again absolutely love this build however there are a few things I would change now that I’ve had like a bit of a closer look at this the main thing here being this window now I absolutely made sure I recreated this Properly get a side by side view up here this is how it is I don’t know why he decided to make this window like off center I literally all I would have done to fix this is just repeat this over to like make this a two block wide planter Box and a two block wide window so that it’s nice and symmetrical also if you here we have this odd looking design for the windows I mean it’s okay I would have added these planter boxes directly underneath the windows removed these stairs so that it’s just open and then Had stairs on all Corners like this so yeah once again that’s kind of weird but it’s not like you know the end of the world now I also will address their Foundation they used in my opinion way too much texture they added in like mossy cobblestone stone bricks and then Mossy stone bricks and I didn’t add that here in my version this is personally how I would have built it to look so I would have only added some very light texture with Mossy stone bricks also I have absolutely no gripes about this water wheel this is amazing looking this Area over here is a little bit kind of weird I would have added this Sam like pillar design in these areas it does kind of stand out and look a little bit strange just having it as Spruce planks and also in my opinion the roof could Use a little bit of work it is kind of bland I would have gone with my like you know signature style roof where it starts off as slabs and then transitions into stairs for more of like a gradual slope instead of just like these harsh 45 degree angles they yeah other than Just those little nitpicks this build does look quite good and uh yeah honestly I would rate this a 9 out of ten to bump it up to a 10 out of 10 I would have just fixed those minor things but honestly a very good build overall All right next up we have a build here from Mahal and he’s asking how to incorporate some wood but I’m just instead going to uh critique the entire thing now just right off the get-go these Towers look way too wide and thick for how short they are it’s kind of like You know a chode of a tower I guess that’s the best way I can put it so I’d probably just keep them on this layer here you don’t need to extend them out again out into this layer then also for the gate here it’s very flat along here Adding in some simple arches in here or even some wood decals or anything on top of that even like the Sam like Castle design I can’t remember what it’s freaking called but adding that on top of there would look nice as well and now let’s just quickly jump over to Minecraft and I’ll showcase some different gate designs I’ve created just to illustrate those points further alright so here’s a big medieval deep slate gate I’ve created a little while ago now it’s a very similar kind of scale except as you can see instead of having the towers cut off basically at This height here we’ve instead made them way higher and we haven’t gone out crazily with the uh like this area here we’ve kept it on this layer and also because those towers are so tall that allowed us to add in this nice little walkway above the gate here we’ve got Doors that connect the towers up as well and now here’s a very scaled down version and you know completely different style as well this one’s a desert theme but the same idea applies here the towers are you know to scale with the thickness of them the gate Might be honestly a little bit too wide for this but uh it’s all right but here I’m just trying to demonstrate the different style of just having an arch here for the gate instead of just having it being flat and it just definitely increases the builds uh you know like Coolness I guess I don’t know man it makes it look better okay but yeah I’d probably rate this build maybe a six out of ten I do like the light texturing with the stone bricks and stone but it just needs a few little additions to Make it like a bit better of a build I guess be sure to let me know in the comments if you enjoyed this different style of video thank you so much for watching and I’ll see you in the next video Video Information
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In this video I take a look at your guys’ builds on discord and rate them! I also showcase things I would change and what could be …